I think your essay is wonderful! You said your opinion in your first paragraph, then stated why in the next ones. Also the big if is pretty cool. Keep on writing essays and lapses will be corrected. Try to proofread and check the spelling so that it will be better. Your essay answer is very strong and detailed.
When there is justice, there is no mercy. In , Mexico was freed from its mother country, Spain. Only 12 years after, the Alamo was fought with the Anglos and the Mexicans. The Alamo was a settlement that turned into a fort when the Mexicans tried to attack the Texans, or also called, Anglos.